Intuition

After much intuition and deliberation, and not to mention Ryan pointing it out to me, I've re-edited Water to remove all traces of pure insanity. The chapter was getting FAR too insane, even for me to control and I didn't like it. So I removed a ton of stuff in order to work out a more level chain of command, and extend the days spent preparing. Poor kids need something resembling time and it's something I haven't provided recently.

If anyone is wondering just what I took OUT, it's all here.

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Oh, and I just spent a ton of money on NX Cash use. It has to go SOMEWHERE and while I enjoy a fat bank account, I'd like to have SOME fun.